Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Paradise Chapter 12:

Hope you enjoy the new chapter! I post every week now and uni will start soon too so I think this works for me but if I can post earlier, I totally will. It all depends on me having the ideas or not cus most of the time I don't. :(

Thanks for being awesome! :D x

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Previously in Chapter 11:

 “Someone has to be positive,” he grinned, finally looking into my eyes again.

“I’m glad that someone is you,” I blurted out and he looked a bit surprised but he covered his reaction with a warm smile.

“Jawaa I have something weird to tell you,” Hamdan looked nervous, it was weird; I’ve never seen him nervous before.

“Yeah?” I bit my lip.

“Jawaa I, erm-“

Before Hamdan could even continue, the door was pushed open and Deep Voice walked inside with the rest of the kidnappers behind him, scaring all of us.

Hamdan bolted up from the ground, ready to fight any of the guys but I grabbed his arm, stopping him.

“I have a surprise for all you kids,” Deep Voice smirked, watching us in amusement.

“Surprise?” I croaked out.

This wasn’t going to be good.

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“We’re going to change things up a little,” the voice was younger and it was definitely not Deep Voice. It was Young Voice, the younger version of Deep Voice. He was the one who had been around the most when we were first kidnapped but then he disappeared. He was back.

“Change things up?” I croaked out in fear.

“Yes, we have a surprise for you guys,” Deep Voice continued on.

“We’re all going on a little trip,” he continued on saying, his fingers were fiddling over his gun holster whilst the other kidnappers stood behind him, smirking. “Guys, blind fold them and tie them up.”

And just like that, the kidnappers took each one of us, tying our hands and blind folding us to avoid us seeing a glimpse of where we were going. I could hear Hamdan try to fight one of them off but the biggest kidnapper chose Hamdan on purpose to fight back incase he was being too violent.

Hamdan lost the battle had to get tied up twice instead of only once like the rest of us. I gave him a sad smile before my vision was blinded with the piece of black cotton.

“I’ll be the one handling you,” I heard a low whisper into my ear as the pair of strong hands were holding my arms, pushing me, forcing me to walk to a direction I didn’t know about.

The voice was too familiar.

Deep.

Masculine.

Dangerous.

It was Deep Voice.

“Wai3,” I hissed under my breath and he laughed, walking right behind me. I heard doors click shut and were unlocked open, we kept stopping then walking again then stopping, they controlled our every move.

“Ekhthaw hal sayara ana barou7 brou7e wyaha,” I heard Deep Voice give commands and I gritted my teeth in anger once I heard that Deep Voice and I were going to be in a car alone.

I knew we were outside now, I was grinding my foot against the ground under me and it sounded like sand, not something concrete. The weather was also super warm, it hit my skin with a force, and it felt like we were in the desert for some reason than any normal suburban area in Kuwait.
“Ha laish?” I heard Young Voice call out in confusion.

“Bas, shtabe?” Deep Voice replied.

“Khala9 okay bas 3laqal ekhith a7ad wyaak laish brou7k? Tara ehya madre shloun 9ayra, 3ade ten7ash,” Young Voice badmouthed about me.

“Shd3wa kela bent, you think I can’t control a little girl like her?” Deep Voice said in disgust.

“Khala9 okay, we’ll meet up at the same place, right?”

“Eee, khoush.”

Deep Voice pushed his fingers into my back, pushing me forward and my body obeyed, I began walking.

“Dehkhlay yalla,” he ordered and he placed his hands over my waist, pushing me into the car. It was the back of the car, I felt the super closed space, there weren’t any seats and my body had to be squeezed inside.

“Ya wailch etha 6l3tay 9out, fahma?” I felt Deep Voice’s breath against my cheek.

I remained quiet and he shut the trunk of the car. I heard the engine whizz inside the car once he climbed inside and pushed his keys into the ignition.

I had no idea how long the ride was, all I could feel were the bumps on the road because of how the car would nudge and the sides of the trunk would hit my sides, causing me to wince in pain. It was uncomfortable and he was driving too fast. I heard other cars and it felt like we were on some kind of highway.

I tried moving around to untie myself or to move the blindfold a bit over my head but I had no luck, I was stuck as a blind and unmovable corpse in the trunk of some kidnapper’s car.

After what seemed like hours, I heard the trunk pull open and the warmth of the sunlight had hit my already warmed up face.

“Dekhtay?” I heard his deep voice ask me.

I didn’t answer.

He grabbed my shoulders and pulled me out of the car. I felt dizzy for a moment, it was so humid and dark, I just wanted to fall asleep for a bit. I didn’t realize it but I fell onto Deep Voice’s body, collapsing momentarily.

“Offh offh, shfeech?” He sounded surprised and held me in his hands. I was thirsty, starving and warm as hell, I was really going to faint, I could feel it.

His rough hands pushed the blindfold off of me and the bright rays of sunlight blinded my eyes. I finally could see, we were both in the middle of the desert.

What the hell?

I looked around me in panic, there were a few scattered tents far away and the road was a few miles away, I could hear the sounds of cars far off but I still felt stranded alone with him.

Now I was truly becoming even dizzier by the second, I was panicking, fearful and STARVED as hell.

My vision began to dim and blur, I stared at the masked kidnapper in front of me as long as I could before everything was painted black in front of me. Before I fell into the dark sleep, I felt his ands grab me once again, but gently, before I finally fainted into the blackness.

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“Jawaa? Jawaa!” Cold water was seeping into my mouth and the voice was muffled, I couldn’t hear it properly but my mouth automatically opened to allow the water to drizzle into my tongue and down my throat.

“Hffff, mu wakta,” I heard him sound more worried than annoyed. I was squeezing my eyes tight before I pushed them open, it wasn’t as sunny anymore, and the skies were fading into colours of orange and pink. A face popped into my view, the dragon-masked kidnapper didn’t have a dragon mask on him anymore, it was more like a ski mask. The mask was black and had three holes, two for his eyes and one for his mouth.

For the first time ever, I saw his eyes. I imagined them to be as dark as his dangerous soul but instead, they were light and were the colour of the fresh grown trees I’d stare at when I was a kid, visiting California with my parents.

His eyes were truly green with splashes of almond green, I questioned for a second that if he was even Kuwaiti or a kidnapper, his eyes weren’t cruel, they were kind and reassuring.

“Jawaa? Akheeran!” He huffed, he was holding the water bottle over my mouth and his lips were dry but I caught the colour of his tanned skin.

“G-get off me!” I snapped at him suddenly, remembering that he was also the same man who hit me.

“Shfeech?! Ga3da asa3dch!” He yelled back at me in anger, his eyes growing darker as the sun began to disappear through the clouds.

“Etsa3idny?! YOU kidnapped me,” I spat at him, pushing him off and grabbing the water bottle from his hand, finishing the drink before he could steal it away from me.

“Ungrateful b****, I swear,” he grunted, getting up from the ground to walk off back to the car. I was lying on the sand, my hair smelled of desert and my knees were dirty, I tried cleaning myself up but I still felt pretty dizzy.

“Kaa, eklay,” he walked back towards me, throwing a paper bag at me. I looked up at him in surprise and smelled the food through the paper bag. I tore it open and saw french fries and a sandwich.

“What if it’s poisoned?” I looked at him with doubt.

“Do you want to starve to death? Kaifich,” he shrugged, having his own paper bag full of food for himself. He was eating a piece of french fry in front of me, making it harder for me to say no to the food. I gave up and stuffed a couple of the fries into my mouth, chewing the pieces of heaven.

“You’re welcome,” he watched me in amusement. I ignored him and continued eating in silence. He sat right besides me, doing the same, staring off into the distance.

I began looking at my surroundings. I could see a few tents far off and I was wondering if I could run towards that area and scream for help once I was done eating. I wasn’t tied up anymore or blind folded, he probably freed me while I was unconscious.

“Don’t even think about it,” Deep Voice muttered.

“Ha? Shnu?” I looked at him, confused.

“Don’t think about running to those tents, maku a7ad, 3balch ma cheyekt?”

“Shnu al7een ma agder akhiz 3la ra7te?” I annoyingly snapped at him, hiding my shocked expression. I couldn’t believe that he found it so easy to read my mind.

“La 6egeeny b3ad.”

“No sorry, I’m not like you. Violent and heartless.”

“Walla ench de3la, al7een 67tay ghashyana w sa3adtch w lal7een em3a9ba? Ley meta? Tara maleit,” his green eyes met mine.

“Tabeene a’97ak? Astanes? You kidnapped me! For God’s sakes, how blind can you be?” I snapped at him.

“Khala9 okay sektay bas, 3awertay rasy.”

I looked away, ignoring his presence.

Soon enough, it was beginning to get darker and I began to get more fearful of everything. He simply sat next to me, lounging and not doing anything. I couldn’t give him the silent treatment any longer, I had to ask and silence my growing curiosity.

“Okay, laish ga3deen hnee?” I broke the silence.

“I ran out of gas, mafrouth enrou7 mukan thane.”

“W al7een shnu? This is the great surprise?” I asked sarcastically.

“La2, ga3da agoulch mafrouth enrou7 mukan thane, shfeech 9amkha?”

“Offh okay bas ley meta ra7 neg3ad hnee?”

“Wai3 7anna, khala9 dageit 3leehum al7een bas nen6er.”

“Okay,” I looked away in annoyance, once again.

“Shfeech kela mtnerfza?” He looked at me.

“Ana? Etha ana mtnfrza 3yal enta shnu?”

“See? Proves my point,” he sighed.

“Do I need to give you the whole you-kidnapped-me story again?”

“La2 la2, heard that too many times already, change the story will you?” I caught him smile.

“To what? You murdering me?”

“Such a violent mind you have, more like into a more pleasant one.”

“There’s nothing pleasant about kidnapping and hitting,” I reminded him, finally looking at him once again. It was becoming harder to see him properly in the dark, his green eyes were now mahogany brown in the darkness.

“Hey, we’re going to be stuck here for a bit so either you play nice or I can be the a**hole you hate again, shtabeen?” Suddenly his voice sounded serious, scary serious. I could only remember how painful his hand would feel against me whenever he would hit me, it terrified me and I was forced to hide my attitude and hate towards him.

“Fine.”

“Good. Al7een ey wa7d 9ar 7beebch?”

What?” I cried out in surprise.

“Mi7sen aw Hamdan?”

“Wela wa7d feehum!” I snapped at him. “Shal tafkeer?”

“What? You’ve never dated?” He smirked.

“It’s non of your business, stop,” I rolled my eyes at him.

“Atwaqa3 Hamdan 9a7? Kel dgeega ga3d yedafe3 3anch el 7m*r,” he snickered.

“Shaku?!” I wanted to just slap him now and then, he was being so annoying about everything. He was worse than my own friends Thajbah and Maha when they teased me about guys in our school.

“You’re such a goody two shoes,” he shook his head in disappointment.

“Metrabya, sh3abalk?”

“That’s no fun, bad girls are way more fun. 7asafa chan khathait Dalal, she looked like a bad girl.”

“Eee wallah, a7san meni, chan khathait’ha! So I wouldn’t be the one here stuck with you.”

“Laa, she’s too in love with Hamdan, too desperate. A7b elthgal,” he shook his head once again.

“Shdarak?” I looked at him, my eyebrows furrowing in confusion. How did he know the love lives of everyone or what was going on in the hostages’ room while we were all alone?

“I know everything little girl.”

“Stop calling me that seriously, ana mu yahel.”

“Chem 3umrch? 15?”

“Turning 18!”

“Aha, senior mu 9a7?”

“W enta chem 3umrk?” I asked, wanting to get some facts on him.

“Chem ta36eeni?”

“Walla m3a el mask, atwaqa3 20, el mask ye9aghrk,” I said sarcastically. “Y3ne shdarane? Agder ashouf wayhk y3ne?”

“Man, your attitude never goes away, does it?” He smirked, finding me amusing.

“I’m only nice to my friends.”

“You were much nicer before when you were playing with my guns bas I knew it was fake, what? Did you run out of fakeness now little girl?”

“I told you to stop calling me that.”

“I’ll call you whatever I want, get used to it, you’re my hostage, remember?”

“I wish I could forget,” I sighed, shooting him a glare.

“I won’t let you forget it,” he gave me a wink that made me feel even more disgusted, I didn’t even think that was possible.

“I’m sure you won’t.”

“Surprising, a girl like you never dated.”

“Would you stop talking about that? Ugh,” I was growing even more annoyed by the second.

“You’re not too bad to look at, shnu? Did you reject off any guys who wanted to date you or are you too innocent? Aren’t you in a mixed school, aren’t you supposed to be cool with dating w kelshay?”

“Just because I go to a mixed school doesn’t mean I have to date or be a wh*re, okay?”

“Offh offh ma gelna shay, haday shway. A9lan aku 7lween wela kela jeyakir nafs Mi7sen w Hamdan?”

“Shaku!”

“Aha y3ne Hamdan w Mi7sen mu jeyakir 3ndech?” He grinned.

“Will you stop it?! They’re like brothers to me, we went to the same school for years.”

“All the reason to find them attractive.”

“What’s it to you? Why are you so interested in my ‘love’ life?”

“Love life b3ad? 3ndech esm 7aga?” He laughed, making fun of me.

“You’re so immature, God.”

“My first girlfriend was a bad girl, I was only 12 back then, et9adgeen?”

“Tara ma se2alt 3ank.”

“It only lasted for like a month bas hey, at least I got my first kiss.”

“Wai3 jad enta wa9ikh, just stop it.”

“Second girlfriend was at 12 again, cheated on my first girlfriend, kanet maleeqa de3la 7ail.”

“STOP.”

“Third one had a nice body bas ghabeya 7ail w lazga.”

“Enta shnu? You count your girlfriends?!”

“6ele3tay 9aida b3ad,” he started laughing, his deep voice sounding more playful now.

“Shnu?” I froze for a moment.

“You can’t take a joke? Ga3d atghashmar wyach, loosen up a bit will you?”

“W ana shdrane what’s fake and true with you? You’re so bipolar.”

“Shnu y3ne bipolar?”

“You change your mood super fast, multiple personalities.”

“Sounds like a super power.”

“Tara mu shay 7lu lema a7ad yigoul 3ank bipolar as an insult.”

“A9lan wela mara 6ela3 shay 7lu men 7aljich, bas kela insults.”

“Do you blame me? You ki-“

“Kidnapped me, hit me, blah blah,” he cut me off and continued my sentence in a girly voice, trying to imitate me. “Yuba fahamna, bas et3edeen elkalam.”

I huffed and ignored him.

“Don’t move, I’m going to go take a piss and if I find you gone, I will hunt you down and kill you myself got it?” He suddenly said, his words hard as steel.

“Okay,” I croaked out. I watched him walk off towards a bush to do his “business”, he had his back to me so he couldn’t even see me. I got up from the ground and ran towards the car before he could see me. I wasn’t planning to drive off because 1) I can’t drive, even for my life and 2) his threat was so real and I wasn’t ready to die.

Plus all my other plans were total fails, I didn’t even know how to start the car properly to escape but I knew for sure that I can search the car for any hints about his identity or try to call someone if I found a phone.

I climbed into the passenger seat and searched as fast as I could, the car basically had nothing.

No phone.

No wallet.

Nothing!

But I caught the sight of the gas information, it said that the tank of gas was full but Deep Voice said that the reason we were here was because we ran out of gas…

Now I was truly terrified and wished I could drive. But it was too late, I had to leave the car fast before Deep Voice was back but more than one question began to whirr around in my curious head.

What the hell is Deep Voice trying to do, trapping me here with him?

Was this the whole surprise?

Or was the surprise going to show up… soon?

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Comment down below about your feedback! What do you guys think Deep Voice is trying to do?:o


Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Paradise Chapter 11:

Hey guys, sorry I've been a bad blogger. Long story and I'm sure everyone's too intent on reading to really read this part of the chapter haha. I tried making it as long as possible but I seriously have no ideas, so I just tried my best. I'm keeping the next really good idea for the next two chapters to make the story longer.

Hope you guys enjoy the chapter. :D

You're all the best for being so patient and kind, much love. xx

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Previously in Chapter 10:

“One more stupid trick, you’re going back in the room or even killed,” he warned me but he sounded like he wanted me to stay too, to at least keep him entertained since for some reason he was so “bored”.

Before I could answer him, the door behind me was pushed open by another guy and before I could see if it was Young Voice or Mu6lag/Bu Hussain, I saw someone else entirerly.

Mi7sen was pushed into the room, all bruised and bloody by a tall figure that I didn’t really put my attention on.

“Mi7sen!” I cried out in horror, the acting I staged a few seconds ago melted away.

“Kahoo,” Mu6lag had stated. It wasn’t Young Voice afterall and Mi7sen was pushed down to the floor besides me.

“Perfect,” Deep Voice smirked, watching my whole reaction. Mu6lag left, closing the door behind him as I crawled towards Mi7sen, trying to evaluate him.

“Mi7sen?!” I started shaking him but he wouldn’t speak, his eyes were closed and his face was full of bruises.

But what really terrified me next were the words I heard Deep Voice utter in amusement:

“You are probably the worst actor in the whole country of Kuwait ya Jawaa.”

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“Mi7sen?!” My hands were over his chest, nudging his body repeatedly but he wouldn’t move, his eyes ere shut tightly and there were stains of blood that were painted over all of his body, as if it was a canvas.

“Mmm,” Mi7sen groaned under his breath.

“Wayhch mu 9ij,” I heard Deep Voice laugh in amusement, watching my expression change into horror.

“How is this funny to you?!” I spat at him in fury.

“You’ll know why soon enough, keep hugging your lover boy, I’m enjoying the show,” he pointed a hand over at Mi7sen when he worded “lover boy”.

“Jawaa?” I heard Mi7sen groan out, I quickly turned around to face him.

“Mi7sen? Kane kane,” I sighed, looking over the endless number of bruises that masked him, I could only imagine what they would do to me, they had no mercy, even as humans, not just as kidnappers.

“7beebtk mawjouda,” Deep Voice smirked.

I ignored him, fighting wouldn’t help the matter anymore. He already caught me in acting, he didn’t believe my act at all, I was running out of ideas and I felt like giving up.

Before I knew it, a pair of hands grabbed me from behind and pulled me up. I had my eyes shut, expecting a punch to the face, or even worse, to the ribs. But I was pushed down to the ground and I heard a door click shut behind me, once my eyes were open again, I realized that one of the kidnappers had taken me out of Deep Voice’s room and pushed me into back in the hostages’ room.

“Jawaa! Are you okay?!” The first voice I heard was Hamdan’s before Muneera’s and Dalal didn’t even bother asking, I could feel her hard gaze on me. She looked disappointed that I didn’t have new bleeding bruises.

“Y-yeah,” I croaked out, looking around me but finding Mi7sen nowhere in sight. He was still with the kidnappers, which only made me feel worse.

Hamdan was sitting next to Dalal whilst Muneera was in her own corner, I approached Muneera, ignoring Hamdan altogether. He was standing up to walk over to me but I made myself appear as if I didn’t even notice him.

“What happened?” Muneera whispered over to me but I was staring fof to the distance. Hamdan still walked over to where I was, leaving Dalal to sit alone with a grumpy look on her face.

“Jasich? Did he hit you? What happened Jawaa? Khara3teena!” Hamdan’s questions kept piling over and his eyes were staring into mine but I wouldn’t look back into his.

“Sheft Mi7sen,” I blurted out before my vision began to blur. Before I realized it, the tears were pouring over.

“Jawaa!” Muneera noticed the tears and I saw the fear creep onto her face.

“Jawaa shfeeh Mi7sen?” Hamdan exclaimed, I realized the tears only made them panic even more. I brushed the tears off of my face with the back of my hand, feeling myself shake uncontrollably.

“They beat him up, it’s all my fault, I made everything worse,” I hiccupped.

“Shnu?!” Hamdan pushed his fingers into his hair, his face looking pained. “Is he hurt that badly?”

I simply nodded, remembering Mi7sen’s cuts and bruises.

“Ana mu gltlch?!” Hamdan suddenly exclaimed right at me, seeming angry. “Gltlch ma etrou7een! Laish et3andeen?!”

“Shnu tabeene asawe?!” I snapped at him. “At least I was trying to get us out of here!”

“And we aren’t?”

“I know my plan failed okay? I know it’s all my fault, I know I’m making everything worse, you don’t have to rub it in my face Hamdan!”

“Jawaa ana-“ Hamdan began but Muneera cut him off.

“Hamdan just stop, go.”

Hamdan looked surprised that Muneera finally spoke up; Hamdan seemed to be cornered so he nodded and walked off back to his spot next to Dalal.

I hugged my knees to my chest and covered my face into my arms, wanting to shut everyone off. Muneera didn’t bother me with any more questions, she let me be and I was silently grateful.


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It seemed like hours had passed and I stayed awake yet my eyes were shut, wet from the tears. I could hear the slight sleepy whimpering of Muneera who was next to me and I could weirdly hear a girl snore, I assumed that it was Dalal.

I heard quiet footsteps approach me but I kept my head down, acting asleep. I felt someone sit besides me due a shoulder lightly touching mine.

“Jawaa?” He whispered. “Ga3da?”

I ignored.

It was Hamdan.

“Jawaa, I know you’re awake tara.”

I ignored again.

“Hey, shfeech t7gereen?”

Ignore.

“Jawaa heyyy?”

Ignore.

“Okay I see how it is,” I heard Hamdan sigh.

Ignoring still.

“Yaay agoulch ene asif bas ma dam ench ga3da t7greny, khala9 bagoum w ma ra7 at2asaf,” Hamdan whispered. “Yalla bagoum..”

And I quickly took my head out to face him and I was faced with his smile.

“Knew it would get you out of your cave,” he sounded confident.

“Hm?” I looked away, not looking into his dark eyes for a moment longer.

“I’m sorry, I was just worried about Mi7sen and I was worrying for hours about you, I thought they took you away,” Hamdan’s smile vanished and was replaced with a frown.

“You were worried about me?” The anger in me was slowly melting away.

“Yeah…”

“It’s fine, I barely have a scratch on me.”

“Your cheek looks purple, did he hit you again?” He caught me in my lie.

“He hit Mi7sen a lot more,” I sighed.

“I know but you’re hurt too.”

“I’m not.”

“Did the scumbag slap you?”

“I don’t want to talk about it,” I didn’t want to remember any of it anymore.

“Jawaa he’ll hurt you again if you keep trying to get to him,” Hamdan wouldn’t take his eyes off of me but I was too scared to look back into his. I was afraid I’d spill everything; tell him how terrified I was while I was alone with Deep Voice, how terrified I was when I saw Mi7sen, how I literally gave up on leaving.

“I know.”

“Next time you’ll tell me if you’ll plan to do something, right?”

“I doubt I’ll plan anything else after so many failed attempts.”

“Hey, are you giving up now? After everything?” He sounded surprised.

“I don’t know.”

“Jawaa, hey, look at me.”

I finally turned my head and our eyes met. I tried not to get lost for a second and lose the wall I took so long to build.

“The Jawaa I know is a stubborn fighter, she never gives up. What happened?” He said with a sad smile.

“Why aren’t you asleep yet?” I changed the subject.

“Ma feene noum, ga3da afaker,” he answered. I was grateful enough that he went with the flow, not harassing me about why I was ignoring his question.

“What’s on your mind?”

“Ome w obouy,” he looked away, now it was his turn to avoid my eyes.

“I miss my parents too,” I sighed. “The whole family, my friends.. kelman.”

“Haman Miss Andrew?” Hamdan joked and I giggled. Miss Andrew was the Chemistry teacher everyone hated, she would spit while she was teaching and she would always pick on students, she found bullying her own students funny.

“Haman ehya,” I laughed.

“Hey at least we don’t get to go to school because we’re excused from the class since we’re kidnapped,” Hamdan tried being positive.

“True, Mr. Positive.”

“Someone has to be positive,” he grinned, finally looking into my eyes again.

“I’m glad that someone is you,” I blurted out and he looked a bit surprised but he covered his reaction with a warm smile.

“Jawaa I have something weird to tell you,” Hamdan looked nervous, it was weird; I’ve never seen him nervous before.

“Yeah?” I bit my lip.

“Jawaa I, erm-“

Before Hamdan could even continue, the door was pushed open and Deep Voice walked inside with the rest of the kidnappers behind him, scaring all of us.

Hamdan bolted up from the ground, ready to fight any of the guys but I grabbed his arm, stopping him.

“I have a surprise for all you kids,” Deep Voice smirked, watching us in amusement.

“Surprise?” I croaked out.

This wasn’t going to be good.

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What do you think the surprise is? Leave your feedback in the comments down below, thank you so much for reading! x

Friday, August 2, 2013

Paradise Chapter 10:


Hey, I've been kind of on writer's block (meaning I have no ideas lately) and some stuff has been troubling me personally so I apologise again for being a sucky blogger with not posting enough. :(

Hope you enjoy this chapter though, tried making it as long as possible.

I've already shown some hints to the whole mystery of the kidnapping, anyone smart enough to catch the hints?

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Previously in Chapter 9:

“La2, entay g3day wyaay,” Deep Voice grabbed my arm before I could go back inside. I smiled to myself but Hamdan looked worried, he shook his head, telling me no but I ignored him; I looked back at Deep Voice.

“Wain?”

“Betshoufeen wain,” Deep Voice said before locking the door, trapping the others.

I was both terrified and excited.

Terrified because of this violent man in front of me, taking me away from everyone else.

Excited because Jawaa’s Plan Part 1 has just succeeded.

Just a few more parts to the plan left.

Just don’t mess up Jawa, don’t mess up. I thought to myself before being forced to follow Deep Voice.

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“Dekhlay yalla,” he ordered me and I listened. He ushered me into an entirely different room, a room I haven’t seen before. The room looked more personal, personal as in that it was filled with dirty clothes on the floor; there were multiple manly looking perfume bottles on the dressing table besides me. The walls were painted in ash grey, the rug under me was black against the wooden floor; the bed was against the wall, which had a window right over it.

Darn it, the curtains were blocking my view of what was outside!

“Man, I didn’t realize how boring it could be having a bunch of students kidnapped,” his deep voice startled me, I forgot for a few seconds that he was standing right behind me.

“Um,” I mumbled, I couldn’t exactly relate to what he was saying. I ignored him and walked a few steps closer to the bed, clearly not wanting to stay close to him but not wanting to sit on his bed either. There was a chair besides the bed but I was afraid to sit, maybe he was a control freak and wanted to order me around, I certainly didn’t know a thing about him or his personality.

“G3day, shfeech?”

“Oh okay,” I sat on the chair, it was the safest spot and I was sure that he couldn’t do any moves on me that way. I watched him approach his bed and lay back on it, he was still holding onto his gun, aiming it straight at me.

“Khayfa?” He asked.

“Men?” I avoided his eyes, staring at the perfume bottles on the dressing table.

Polo. Burberry. Armani. Hm, no Abercrombie & Fitch?

“Meny.”

“Shaku?”

“You’re shaking,” he pointed at my shoulders with his gun, it only made my body shake more furiously.

“Is it the gun?” He looked at me and back at his fun, I saw the way his neck would move and I could have sworn I heard him smirk behind his mask but I wasn’t one hundred percent sure.

“No, giltlk I’m fascinated by them,” I lied, trying to buy his trust.

“Are you?”

“Eee,” I stared right into his ugly mask.

“3yal,” he breathed and paused, he got up from the bed and approached me, standing right in front of me with his gun before he said his next words, that only made my heart squeeze itself in fear, “meskeeh.”

“What?” I blurted out.

“Hold the gun, don’t you find it fascinating?” He challenged me.

“Fine, hand it over.”
“Oh no no, you won’t hold it alone.”

“What do you mean?” My eyebrows furrowed in confusion.

“Men9ijich ana mu ghabe, 3shan tethbi7eeny?” Deep Voice snickered. “Goumay.” He backed off, giving me some space. I stood up, listening to his instructions.

“T3alay, shfeech yal khawafa, ma ra7 athbi7ch. Well not yet anyway,” he laughed, finding his own joke funny, it only caused my face to pale in horror but I tried masking my own fear and I took a few steps forward. He turned me around by putting his hands on my shoulders and forced me to hold the gun alongside with him.

Basically I was holding his masculine hands and the gun altogether, it felt heavy and terrifying, his chest was pressed against my back and he was simply too close to me. I wanted to scream, to push him off but I tried controlling myself.

“Haa, shrayech?” He hissed into my ear, probably sniffing the fear off of me.

“I imagined that it would have been heavier, eh it’s more boring this way,” I made sure my tone sounded bored and uninterested but my heart couldn’t help but hammer inside my chest.

“A picky girl I see, maybe you’re the type who’ll enjoy rifles.”

“Huh?” I couldn’t hear him properly for a second, my ears felt blocked, simply touching the gun made cold sweat run down my neck.

“Rifles? Those big guns? Weeh entay sh3rfch, 9ej bent,” he sounded unimpressed and I had to impress him again.

Jawaa, think, just think! All those hours of you playing Call of Duty and Black Ops with your cousins on the Playstation 3 must have taught you something.

“I’m just not into baby guns, I thought you were the type who liked SWAT mini Ks or a L85 bas enta sh3rfk, you’re just a typical Kuwaiti guy,” I shrugged him off, finally pulling away from him and letting go of both the gun and his hands. I was taking a huge risk in ridiculing him but it was the only way to play his game.

“Sh3rfch eb L85 or a SWAT mini K?” He sounded surprised. At this moment, I wished so badly just to see his facial reaction but the stupid mask was blocking it.

“I told you, I’m fascinated by guns,” I continued to lie through my teeth.

“Hmm, how about this one then,” he smirked before walking backwards to his dresser. He pulled out the shelf and dug his hand under the clothes to pull out another gun. It was similar to the one he was already holding but it was bigger, definitely bigger and scarier.

“This is way heavier, want to try holding it?” He asked, this time he didn’t sound challenging but more intrigued.

“Why not?” I shrugged, biting the inside of my lip.

I swear Jawaa, if you mess this up, he won’t be the one to kill you but you’ll end up killing yourself with these guns!

I ignored the little voice in my head and approached him.

“Bas this time, I hold it myself,” I said before he could grab me.

“Mashe bas if you do anything funny, I’m shooting your head off princess.”

“The same goes to you smart guy,” I acted along and he seemed to enjoy it, he handed the gun over and it was way heavier! I tried holding onto it with two hands and avoided putting my fingers on anything that moved, I was dead scared of shooting someone.

Jawaa, now! Aim it at him, scare him!

A voice crept into my head, I was about to aim it right at him but the smart voice inside me clicked and whispered into my head:

Yal ghabeya the gun probably has no bullets inside it, don’t mess this up again, earn his trust then backstab him.

“Take a shot,” he said, disturbing my thoughts.

“At what?” I asked, alarmed.

“At the wall right there, yalla,” there was a hint of a smile in his voice. That was all the proof I needed to know that there weren’t any bullets in the gun indeed.

“Yeah sure, as if you’d be dumb enough to give me a loaded gun,” I smirked, winning his game.

“Smart girl.”

“I learn from the best,” I nervously giggled, trying to ignore the rock heavy gun in my hands. “Like I said, I’m not interested in baby guns.” I said, giving an excuse on why I didn’t want to hold the gun anymore. I handed it back to him and he took it back, laughing.

“I’m sure your dad wouldn’t be so happy learning that his perfect little princess has a love for guns,” he stated and his words angered me, who was he to talk about my father? But I clenched my hands into fists, trying to obtain myself.

“Yeah…”

Suddenly, I was homesick. I looked away to try to hide the teary eyes I had.

I felt a finger on my cheek, it scared me for a second but it was Deep Voice. I looked right at him, surprised and terrified.

Was he going to hit me again?

“That bruise, did I put that there?” He asked but he didn’t sound worried, he sounded proud. It made me feel disgusted.

“You’re lucky I forgive easily,” I lied, trying to get him to befriend me some more.

“W men gal abeech you even forgive me?”

“I had a feeling, that’s all,” I took another risk with my words.

“6ela3tay theqa.”

“W enta mu theqa?”

“What’s a man without his confidence?” He smirked before walking back to the bed, lazily draping his body over it. His shirt rode up slightly, his tan and masculine body showing slightly.

“Aren’t you curious about my identity?” He suddenly asked and I tore my eyes away from his stomach.

Whatever, he was six packs. So what? Dave Franco has six packs, Ryan Gosling has six packs, and they sure as hell don’t kidnap girls and hit them, now do they?

“Nah, not really,” I played it cool, walking around his, well I’m assuming that it’s his room. I tried looking for any hints about his identity, anything.

“3yal laish ga3da et7ouseen? You won’t find any pictures of me or anything that might lead you to my name, so don’t bother,” he caught me and suddenly I froze in my spot.

“I was actually looking for a hair comb,” I pointed to my messy hair, “or at least something to eat or drink.” I lied.

“You3ana?”

“La walla?”

“Starving for another day won’t kill you,” he bluntly stated. “A9lan hal shay yiwanes, you’ll lose weight in the process. You need a couple of kilos.”

So now I need to lose weight? Can I freaking slap this.. ugh Jawaa just don’t use up your energy for that a**hole.

“Yeah sure, let’s act like I’m a fat pig and you’re totally not attracted to me,” I attacked him.

“La et9adgeen nafsch wayed tara,” he smirked but his tone sounded wobbly, as if he was unsure for a second.

“Yeah, your type’s more like an idiot right? To match your idiot of a mind?” This time, I couldn’t control my words, the anger slipped out and I saw him bolt off of the bed in a hurry to approach me.

“Shnu?” He hissed angrily.

“N-nothing,” I stuttered, suddenly regretting every word I said.

POOP. POOP. POOP! UGHHH, Jawaa you ruined everything!

“No, say it again you b****. Idiot, ha?”

“Ma dam enk sem3t shgelt then don’t ask,” that was it, I had no control in me anymore. I let my anger pour out. “Idiot.”

And before I knew it, I felt a sharp slap to my cheek and a force had pushed me down to the floor. I only realized that it was him who had slapped me with such a force once I was o the ground, grabbing my left cheek as it began to burn in pain.

“Now I feel better,” he smirked.

“Are you freaking bipolar or something?” I yelled at him, I was no longer scared but furious.

“Shnu?” He sounded genuinely confused, not knowing what he did wrong.

“One second you’re cool then you’re that jerk again!”

“W entay shnu? One second you’re cool then you’re a total b****.”

“Telling a girl she needs to lose weight isn’t exactly red roses, okay?” I tried reasoning with him, I got some of his trust and I need to keep it.

“Shd3wa, you girls are so sensitive.”

I ignored him, rubbing my cheek and I stayed on the floor, avoiding him. I felt him stare at me, waiting for a response but I didn’t give him one. He was impossible to reason with, he disgusted me, he terrified me, he angered me, and he was a mess to control.

“Shekly maleit mench, hmm should I take you back to that room or not?” He thought outloud.

Ugh Jawaa, you messed up the whole plan! FIX IT.

“I’m a total b****, aren’t I?” I faked a laugh but tried making it sound as genuine as possible.

“Huh?” He sounded surprised but amused. “Shgeltay?”

“I’m a b*****.”

“W akheeran you confess to it!”

“Yeah sorry bas I’ve been dieting like crazy last year so when someone says anything about my weight I get pissed,” I lied, I’ve never dieted, I’m that girl who always enjoys her burgers and also enjoys working her butt off by playing soccer with the team but I gave him what he wanted, I gave him the typical girl of me.

“El’thaher tabeen tg3deen wyaay, ha?” He snickered.

“Theqa,” I playfully joked.

“I learn from the best,” he joked back and I was surprised, his moods changed so fast and I was still trying to hide the anger and disgust I had from him. I didn’t know if it was because he was just a guy or that he was seriously bipolar.

“One more stupid trick, you’re going back in the room or even killed,” he warned me but he sounded like he wanted me to stay too, to at least keep him entertained since for some reason he was so “bored”.

Before I could answer him, the door behind me was pushed open by another guy and before I could see if it was Young Voice or Mu6lag/Bu Hussain, I saw someone else entirerly.

Mi7sen was pushed into the room, all bruised and bloody by a tall figure that I didn’t really put my attention on.

“Mi7sen!” I cried out in horror, the acting I staged a few seconds ago melted away.

“Kahoo,” Mu6lag had stated. It wasn’t Young Voice afterall and Mi7sen was pushed down to the floor besides me.

“Perfect,” Deep Voice smirked, watching my whole reaction. Mu6lag left, closing the door behind him as I crawled towards Mi7sen, trying to evaluate him.

“Mi7sen?!” I started shaking him but he wouldn’t speak, his eyes were closed and his face was full of bruises.

But what really terrified me next were the words I heard Deep Voice utter in amusement:

“You are probably the worst actor in the whole country of Kuwait ya Jawaa.”

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