Hey guys! I'm SO deeply sorry for not posting for such a long time. I've stopped blogging ever since university started but I got the sudden inspiration to start a whole new story. But NO, I WILL continue Paradise but not now, probably after this story if people still want to see Paradise continued, it's because it's been so long that I honestly just got bored of Paradise, the ideas stopped coming in and I got inspirations for new stories.
This story will be VERY confusing at first but keep on reading, it gets better as you go on. There will be a LOT of events/action going on at once so it needs patience. :p
Everything you're expecting to happen in this story is completely wrong, it's a mind game haha.
Enjoy and tell me what you think in the comments below as a first impression, thank you so much! (comments are now open again, even for anonymous writers.)
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This story will be VERY confusing at first but keep on reading, it gets better as you go on. There will be a LOT of events/action going on at once so it needs patience. :p
Everything you're expecting to happen in this story is completely wrong, it's a mind game haha.
Enjoy and tell me what you think in the comments below as a first impression, thank you so much! (comments are now open again, even for anonymous writers.)
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“Ma et3rft 3la w7da aw9akh mench, mabe
akelmch, ya wailch etha dageitay 3lay aw kalemteeny mara thanya, ma a3rfch wela
et3rfeeny, fahma?!”
I
read the words over and over again, playing them back in my head. It’s been
five days since he sent that message to me, five whole days. It was a text
message, he had deleted me off every social network, every chatting app,
blocked my number and I didn’t even need to check to know it.
It
broke me, every word; every letter that was typed in one easy text message
broke me. My walls were all broken down into crumbs of nothingness, he broke
them down and now I had no tools to build them back up.
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Nine
months ago.
“Hey,
you.” A male voice behind me startled me. I turned around and met his dark
eyes, they reminded me of the mahogany colour of my coffee that I was hugging
to my chest, trying to use it as a mini fireplace to warm myself up in the
winter’s weather.
“Na3am?”
I answered coolly. He took a step closer, he seemed too tall to my 161cm
height, his jawlines were sharp and his dark hair would cover his eyes ever so
often whenever he moved.
“Yasmine
Al-X, right?”
“A3rfk?”
I looked up at him, confused. We were both standing in the streets of New York
City, it was 9:03pm exactly and I had just left Starbucks after a night with
the girls.
“Shfeech
neseiteeny?” He chuckled and I noticed a hidden dimple on his left cheek.
“Sorry?”
“Jassim
Al-X, your chemistry partner during ninth grade?” He seemed a bit embarrassed
now, I noticed because he suddenly stuck his already gloved hands into the
pockets of his true religion jeans, looking away slightly, rethinking the whole
choice of approaching me.
“Jassim
Jassim? The one with glasses and was shorter than me Jassim?” I seemed even
more confused now, looking up at his tall height and naked eyes.
“Ee
teghayert shway,” he chuckled.
“Shway?!”
I laughed. “Mashallah, teghayert 7aail!”
“And
you didn’t change at all,” he smiled.
“Shd3wa
3ad ma teghayert at all?” I took my braces off, had my hair dyed to a lighter shade
of brown and I started applying a bit of make up, I looked far different than
the ninth grade version of me.
“It’s
a good thing, ha shlounch shakhbarich?” He continued on, noticing that I’ve
relaxed a bit after recognizing him.
“El7mdellah
tamam, what are you doing here in NYC?” I asked, curious.
“I’m
visiting my friends, ma36eena 3 weeks off after our last course ended, entay?”
“I
study here.”
“What
major?”
“Nutrition,
enta?”
“Chemical
engineering in KU.”
“Mwafg
enshallah,” I began saying, ending the whole conversation. “It was nice seeing
you.”
“Ajme3een,
hey dgeega,” he said once he saw me take a step back, ready to walk back to my
apartment.
“Yasmine!”
I heard the familiar voice of Hawraa calling me from afar. I looked past Jassim
and saw her hurry out of Starbucks holding her Miu Miu purse on one hand and
the other one clutching her books to her chest.
“Bayee
m3ach, male khelg anam 3nd el dorms,” Hawraa’s ponytail slapped her cheek in
the wind as she hurried to my side.
“Yalla
okay,” I agreed, Hawraa always slept over at my apartment whenever she got
bored of the dorms at her university. “Shnu kent betgoul?” I turned my
attention back to Jassim.
“La
khala9 wela shay, it was nice seeing you too, take care!” And just like that,
he turned around and walked away, erasing the words completely from his head
that he had planned to say.
“Mnu
hatha?” Hawraa hissed once we began walking in the direction of where my
apartment was, it was fairly close to Starbucks, which meant daily doses of
beautiful coffee.
“Wa7d
men my old highschool.”
“He’s
cute!”
“He’s
not that bad,” I shrugged and changed the subject.
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I
didn’t see him again for another two whole weeks. By then I was back in Kuwait,
visiting the family.
“Yasmine!”
That same familiar voice called me.
I
turned around and those dark coffee coloured eyes stared right back at me.
“Jassim,”
I politely called back. We were both in Starbucks, yet again. This time it was
the one in Nuzha, not in NYC and it was packed with Kuwaitis who stared at the
both of us once we began speaking to each other.
Yara,
my cousin, elbowed my waist once she saw Jassim. “Mnu hatha?!”
“Ush,”
I hissed back as Jassim approached us.
“Shlounch?”
He was holding onto his receipt, waiting for his drink and he had a dimpled
smile on his face.
“El7mdellah,”
I smiled back, “enta?”
“Tara
ma maleitay men hal small conversations, bas shlounch shakhbarch w b3dain
ashoufch 3la khair?” His eyes teased me, I laughed and forgot about the
Kuwaitis who kept staring at us, as if we were both dating each other, not
simply having a conversation.
“Ee
wallah maleina,” I confessed. “Yara, Jassim, Jassim, Yara,” I introduced them
both. Yara was a bit close-minded; she was still a senior at high school and
had a very shy personality, especially when it came to men.
“Ahlain,”
Yara barely uttered and avoided eye contact. “Ana barou7 el 7amam, dgeega.” And
just like that, she escaped.
“Gelt
shay ghala6?” Jassim hissed, staring at Yara in worry.
“La
la don’t worry, she’s always like that,” I laughed.
“AMERICANO
FOR GASSIM? GASSIM?” The Filipino Starbucks worker yelled out.
“So,
back in Kuwait I see?” Jassim ignored his obvious order and kept on talking to
me.
“Eee,
Christmas break! Mu hatha your drink?”
“Esmy
JAY-ssim, mu GAY-ssim, with a JAY.” He shrugged, a hint of a smile in his
voice.
“Bas
lal7een, your drink!”
“Ee
okay so Christmas break?” He ignored me, continuing.
“Feek
e3nad mu 6abe3y,” I suddenly said.
“La7athtay
men al7een?” He laughed.
“JASMEEN,
HOT WHITE MOCHA TRIPLE SHOT?” It was my turn now, I took a step forward to grab
my drink but I felt his hand on my arm, stopping me.
“Esmch
Yasmine, mu JASMEEN,” he smiled, trying to keep me by his side longer.
“Unlike
you, I’ve grown used to them getting my name wrong,” I pulled my arm away, not
accepting the hint of staying longer and went to grab my coffee. I felt his
eyes on me and I knew for sure he was flirting but I wasn’t interested, yes he
was handsome but I was too used to the typical Kuwaiti guy ways of flirting, it
soon got old and boring and they soon gave up and went to the next girl to hit
on.
He
soon gave up and went to grab his drink too with the misspelling of his name,
right on cue Yara left the bathroom and was back at my side, he lost his chance
to continue the conversation and was forced to give me a smile goodbye.
“He’s
cute,” Yara whispered.
“He’s
not that bad,” I repeated the same exact words and sipped the luxurious taste
of my hot coffee to avoid her dwelling on the subject even further.
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The
third time’s a charm, no?
“Yasmine!”
He called me once again.
Three
days after Starbucks, I bumped into him yet again in Starbucks, this time, it
was in Starbucks Mishref.
“We
keep bumping into each other because of coffee,” Jassim smiled. I was alone
this time, trying to get my coffee before going back to my grandmother’s house
for Friday zwara.
“Oh
really?” I acted like I didn’t notice.
“Hot
white mocha, triple shot?” He asked, his eyes on my coffee.
“Maybe,”
I took a sip and looked at the door, giving him the hint that I’m leaving.
“You’re
staying this time, you won’t escape.”
“Kaifik
oho?” I laughed.
“You
owe me one conversation.”
“I
don’t owe you anything,” I was surprise with his boldness. He was so
straightforward, so early in the game.
“You
will owe me after I tell you something.”
“Tell
me what?”
“Back
in ninth grade, I switched our test papers.”
“Shnu?”
I gulped.
“Tethkereen
lema kentay ga3da tabcheen? You didn’t study for the test, you forgot about it
and we were sitting next to each other so when you finished your test and left
to use the bathroom, I switched the papers last minute w 7a6ait esmch 3la my
paper.”
I
remembered it too well, I was shocked to find a 100% on a test I hadn’t studied
for, they didn’t give our tests back, they just gave us the marks to avoid
students giving the tests to other classes who hadn’t taken the test yet.
“Bas
gltly you got a 100% too..” I remembered asking him what he got.
“I
lied, I got a 12%. I didn’t have enough time to correct your really bad answers,”
he laughed.
“You
did that for me?”
“Yeah,
so you owe me Yasmine Al-X. One conversation over a cup of coffee.” He pushed
the hoodie cap off of his head, running his fingers through his tousled hair
giving me a clearer vision of his eyes.
“That
was the ninth grade!” I had nothing more to say, I was at a loss of words, I
still couldn’t believe that he did such a thing for me and kept it in for so
long.
“So
it doesn’t count for anything?” He shot up an eyebrow at me.
“Embala
bas…”
“3yal
khala9, bacher, 9 am, coffee at 3daileya Starbucks.”
“La7tha
shm3na 3daileya?”
“That’s
a Starbucks we haven’t bumped into yet,” he chuckled.
“W
laish 9 am? Banam!”
“You
never sleep.”
“W
enta shdarak?”
He
tapped a finger over my iPhone, which was in my left hand.
“Twitter.”
And
just like that, yet again, he walked off without another word.
I
checked my twitter followers and found his name. How did I never notice? I
barely checked who followed me, my account was public and I barely tweet.
Suddenly,
it struck me.
The
times I used Foursquare to check in at Starbucks were the times I bumped into
him.
Could
it be that it never was a coincidence with bumping into him?
Before
I could dwell more onto the subject, I was grabbed from behind then pushed
suddenly to the ground hitting the side of my head hard.
Everything
after that was completely black.
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