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Previously
in Chapter 3:
Next,
I was forced outside of the bathroom but not at the same time as Haya. Haya was
called outside and I was trapped inside. I had a feeling that Bu Salem or as
his real name was, Mu6lag, had to take off his mask to act like nothing was out
of the ordinary in front of his sister. He obviously couldn’t show me his face
but why so sensitive about it? Could it be that if I saw his face, I'd
recognise it?
Which
only meant…
This
Mu6lag, wasn’t only a student.
He
was probably one of my classmates.
Or
even one of my friends.
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The
ride to the new destination took what seemed like hours. It bore me to death
and only increased my fears of what was yet to come. I was still processing the
thought over and over again in my head about Mu6lag being one of the
kidnappers.
Could
it be the Mu6lag I shared Biology lessons with? Or the Mu6lag who always teases
me about my hair? Or the Mu6lag I barely knew but he was always the quiet one
in all of the classes? I couldn’t put my finger on it, the voice wasn’t
familiar, non of the voices were, it wasn’t as if I heard them before and I
couldn’t tell the difference on who was who by just looking at the bodies. It
wasn’t as if I memorized every detail in all of the guys’ bodies back in high
school.
I
was completely lost but one thing I knew, the house I was in was definitely Bu
Salem’s and Haya was his sister’s name, her real
name. I felt one step closer to finding out their identities.
“HA!
5,200 views in less than an hour!” Young Voice cheered on, breaking the silence
in the van.
“La
testanes wayed, lal7een lazem nen6er,” Deep Voice said in an unemotional tone.
“Nen6er
7ag shnu?” Young Voice asked.
“Eee
walla shnu bagee b3ad?” Bu Salem called out from his driver’s seat whilst I was
trying to edge my hands out of the ropes they were trapped in. It was
impossible, it was too tight around my wrists and it began to leave red marks
over my skin. I knew this because of the incredible amount of pain I felt.
“We
still have to record the other students we kidnapped,” Deep Voice’s words
gripped my heart in a painful way.
Other students? Fee
b3ad?!
“Oh
ee 9a7,” Young said before silence was poured back into the little space we sat
in. I could still feel Muneera’s shoulder against mine, shaking through the
whole ride but my body remained calm. As long as the gun wasn’t against my
skin, then I was calm.
Seventy-eight
minutes had passed. Counting was what kept me busy through the rides and kept
me aware of how long it took to get to the place.
After
the seventy right minutes, I felt hands pull me off of my seat and push me out
of the van once again. More violent pushes, more marks on my skin but I bore no
sound, I didn’t want to give them the satisfaction of listening to my pain.
“YALLA, ASRA3!” Deep Voice shouted into my ear, his spit
disgusting me once it touched the skin of my ear. I hurried along; hearing
doors open and close, footsteps behind me and locks turning, ready to trap us
inside another room.
He pushed me down to the ground; it was carpeted instead of
wooden so my behind didn’t go through so much pain this time.
“Offh,” I grunted once I landed on the ground. I heard
Muneera do the same sound.
“Yalla, get the other students in here and start recording
once they’re ready Rashed,” Deep Voice ordered but then I heard a door slap
shut, footsteps disappearing off to somewhere. I heard someone else in the room
breathe heavily and I was guessing that we were alone with only one person.
“You know Jawaa, I always had this crush on you,” a familiar
voice said. It was Jerry-I mean, Rashed. The Indian accent was gone; it was his
own original Kuwaiti one.
I remained quiet.
“You were always the prettiest one in Maths class, it was so
weird when they put you in the nerd’s class, a pretty girl like you didn’t fit
in with us nerds,” his voice grew closer, so close that I felt his M&Ms
scented breath on my cheek.
“A liar like you didn’t fit in with a school like ours,” I
spat at him, my fury burning inside of me.
“Tsk tsk tsk Jawaa, ana chathab?” Rashed said in an innocent
voice.
“You helped them kidnap us! I thought you died, I thought
your name was Jerry! Who the heck are you?!” I hissed.
“Haha I’m such a good actor aren’t I?” Rashed smirked. “That
was fake blood, no one really noticed that I wasn’t really dead since they were
on the ground, too scared to look at the kidnappers. But it was brilliant,
wasn’t it? Ma7ad yegder yemathl nefse,” I heard the huge smug grin in his
voice.
“But, it was a real gun.” I breathed out in fright as I
remembered the feeling of the gun’s exterior again over my skin.
“For a smart girl like you, I thought you would have known
that there are things called sound effects?” Rashed laughed. “It was so easy to
just get up and leave the class room, no one noticed or did anything. I bet
they think the kidnappers took ‘Jerry’s’ body off to dump it somewhere.”
“No, they’ll see the blood, they’ll investigate it and know
that it was fake,” I pointed out, feeling clever.
“So? Jerry was kidnapped then or killed off somewhere else,
who the f*ck cares about fake blood on the ground when there are students being
kidnapped?”
“So you were Rashed all this time?” I gulped.
“Ever since I transferred late into the school this year.”
“W shloun ma e3refaw enk Kuwaiti? Akeed jenseitk mu Indian,
shloun chithe?!”
“That’s for you to figure out,” he whispered into my ear,
his lips barely touching my skin. I edged away, panting in fear. I couldn’t
bear him be so close other than even touch me.
“W-why?” I breathed out. “Laish kel hatha?”
“Because it’s fun,”
and with that, he lightly kissed my cheek before I heard him back off. His lips
felt slobber-ish and disgusting, the tears quickly ran down my cheeks, I was
defeated, I couldn’t keep up with my hard exterior anymore.
A door was pushed open and I heard two other bodies be
pushed down to the ground next to us. I heard whimpering and sob that caused my
chest to tighten.
The other students were here.
“SEKTAW BAS!” I was expecting Deep Voice to say those words
but it was Bu Salem, or Mu6lag, whatever his real name was.
Silence.
“Rashed, did you get the camera set up?” Bu Salem asked as I
stared at the dark cloth’s material that was still over my head.
“Eee, yalla.”
And just like that, in the next minute, the dark cloths were
taken off of our heads. Instead of being greeted with raw sunlight, we saw
plain black darkness. We were in a small room that had black painted walls. I
looked to my right and saw other two students seated next to us.
I couldn’t believe my eyes.
It was Hamdan and Mi7sen, both boys were in the same school
year as I was and was known to be the funniest guys in the year with probably
the cutest features. Mi7sen was rugged, lean and tall where Hamdan was taller,
slightly muscled and lean as well. They were both cousins and bore the same
dark tousled hair and dark eyes with masculine jaws.
“Jawaa? Manour?” Both guys croaked out in shock, their eyes
widening when they saw us.
“Haha, it’s like high school reunion but during their young
years,” Bu Salem smirked, finding this enjoyable. I noticed that Bu Salem had a
scar on his wrist, I stared at it and he noticed my eyes, he quickly hid it and
looked to the left.
I followed his direction and saw another man in a dragon’s
mask, I didn’t know who he was until he spoke.
“Yalla?” Deep Voice said.
“You guys know what to do, or else my friend here won’t be
so happy,” Rashed gave all of us a smile, his eyes aimed at Deep Voice when he
said ‘my friend’.
“Action!” Rashed clicked on the button over he camera and I
saw the familiar red light blink, indicating that the camera began to record.
“Yal 7m*r ma ra7 agoul shay, go f*** yourselves!” Hamdan
spat at the men, his dark eyes furious, if he wasn’t tied and trapped then he
would have lunged at the men, ready for a fight. His body posture shouted
angry.
“Hamdan,” Mi7sen hissed to his older cousin, trying to
co-operate with him but Hamdan didn’t listen, he tried to stand up from his
seat, wanting to fight and Muneera looked too frightened to watch, she had her
eyes shut tight, the tears visiting her once again.
“Walla ghabe,” Deep Voice shook his head in disappointment.
His hand reached to the gun holster and his eyes were on Hamdan but then I saw
his fingers flinch for a second, his eyes quickly shifted from Hamdan to me. He
tucked the gun back in its holster and began to approach me; my heart began to
scream in fear as I watched.
Before I knew it, he grabbed a fistful of my chestnut hair
and I felt every piece of hair try to tear our of my scalp, I screamed in pain
and the others watched me in fear. Except the kidnappers of course, they found
it funny.
“STOP IT!” Hamdan screamed, his mouth gaping in shock. Deep
Voice was being stubborn, he only then grabbed Muneera’s hair but Muneera was
even more frightful than I was, her screams were louder and her face had turned
red.
“STOP IT YAL K*LB!” Mi7sen later screamed too, trying to
lunge at the kidnapper but also couldn’t due to him being trapped.
My vision became blurry, I tried to focus on anything else
but the pain was unbearable. My worries used to be split ends but now? I was
worried of being bald. Deep Voice let go of Muneera and she fell down to the
ground, her head had landed besides Mi7sen’s leg and she sobbed into the
ground. Deep Voice didn’t let go of me; instead, he only let go of my hair but
put around one of his arms around my neck, suddenly choking me.
“N-no!” I choked, I couldn’t feel much oxygen, my throat was
being clenched even more forcefully by his biceps and I tried to fidget and
turn to stop him.
“KHALA9 OKAY!” Hamdan screamed and I could have sworn that I
saw his eyes tear up for a second but my vision became even blurrier, it was as
if sleep was welcoming me in, the kind of sleep you never wake up from.
Hamdan’s stared back into the camera as he screamed the
following words through clenched teeth: “HELP US BEFORE THIS F*CKER KILLS US!”
“PLEASE!” Mi7sen shouted too.
“P-please, yuma, yuba, allah yekhaleekom, anyone!” Muneera suddenly got up from
the ground, in-between sobs, and she began to plea.
And just like that, Deep Voice’s arm let go of my throat and
I sucked in gulps of breathes, beginning to cough uncontrollably.
“And cut,” Rashed gulped but this time, he wasn’t grinning
or anything. Even he looked terrified of what had just happened. He shut off
the camera and tried to erase the emotions from his face.
“I told you little sh*ts, listen to my orders or pay,” Deep
Voice spat at us as I lay on the ground, still trying to take as many breaths
as I can, my throat beginning to ache.
“Upload the video and lock them in,” Deep voice said,
leaving the room. Young Voice was nowhere to be seen and Rashed had already
left with Deep Voice. Bu Salem stood in the room by himself, watching us with a
smirk on his face.
“Yahal, walla yahal,” he smirked.
Hamdan glared at him, he was about to speak, I saw his mouth
open for a second but then Mi7sen bumped his shoulder, obviously telling him
silently to shut up.
Bu Salem freed us from the ropes but made sure that the guys
were last, he didn’t want them to do anything funny or try to attack him. He
had his gun aimed at us to stop us from even touching him or fighting back as
he edged away slowly towards the door.
“No funny business,” he said, his gun pointed right at us.
We all stared back at him, waiting for the bullet but instead, he grabbed the
door knob, ready to shut us inside but before he locked us in the small
windowless room, he said the following words that caused a shiver to trail down
my back.
“Welcome to Paradise.”
FIRST!! i swear if you publish a book i would buy all the copies and re read it over and over! so talented mashala, be sure to post soon love! xx
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Ohhh and one more thing! I just want to make sure... About the guys, there's 4 guys sa7? Rashed, Bu Salem/Mu6lag, deep voice, & young voice.. Was it young voice ely kidnapped Jawa? *sorry bess I got confused:$*
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